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Elfpack Daily Poem Submissions 6

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[Hiei's Girl]
Beyond

The world we see
We may live in for eternity
Gray of life
Full of hate
Saddened tears
Riddled with fears
Science rules our life
Or...so they say

Just look beyond
You'll find the place
Were fantasy and sci-fi
Are your fate

Were magic
Is the understanding for life
Your imagination rules your life
Secrets hidden
Behind your face
Become revealed in this place

Walk on a cloud
Fly in the sky
Live that life
You'll never cry

-Written in December 2004




[Shiver]
Killers 'n' Sinners
  The Devils

They're coming in the night
When you arranged your demons to fight
To other dimensions they let you fly
Watching you inconspicuous
Waiting for being lovely vicious
To brake your souls licious

You act the way you go
Hide that your blood can flow
For pleasure you hurt yourself slow
the answers are written in the steam
Like something you only see an the screen.

Snow covers the ground
Time is something you can't count
You loose control
The fear makes you shout it out loud
Firewater makes you crawl
That makes sure that you don't fall

You go out in the dark
It drives you to the grind
While you loose logic in a park
A flash built up your mind
And the hells hound start to bark

So cold you wake up from your grave
Seductive lust calls you damned name
You've lost everything faith
It's time to play a little game
Standing up to stand brave
Something makes you craving for pain.

Rip out her minds and regs
Penetrate her gently in blood
It becomes a ritual instead of sex
Then you feel so wired cut
You want perverted games of wax

In the nights slowly way
He comes down on earth
And orders you hierarchic to pray
You tell him about your birth
That's what you needed to say
You ain't got the nerve

Nothing can stop you
Running with his head
It's something like a cloud
You felt him as a dread
You establish your crew

Devils may hide in the shadows
Take you in the nights sun
Coming from bellows
We want to have some fun
Showing you the death Othello's
For your life you have to run




[Laín]
Haunted

She's clawing at my breast from deep inside. Scratching deep soars in my flesh.
She's screaming out loud in protest, and fills my head with her endless echoes of pain.
With a grim smile she sinks her hands in my heart and our blood becomes one.
Her longing fills my body with lust. I'm taken over, I'm longing, reaching, waiting...
Soon. Soon I wont be able to defeat her anymore, my strength will run dry. She hates being trapped,
it hurts..
it kills.




[..majo..]
Your love

Your lovely eyes
Your sweet smile
I can’t seem to remember them after a while

All I remember
Are all the sweet words you said
When you lay next to me in your bed

I tremble with every word
Every time I feel you lips
Or a touch by your fingertips

I need you, I want you, I love you
And I hope you feel the same
I hope you’re not playing a game

When it’s time for me to go
You beg me “Please stay”
But honey, I’ll never be far away

I’ll always be in your heart
Just hold me close, one more time
And let me end this silly rhyme




[Jinkx313]
Losing Us

It was early January and my worries were clear
The air was full of winter cheer

We sat together beside the fire
Little did I know, goings on would soon be dire

Soon it was June and the heat was intense
I found you hiding and your silence was dense

It was late August when I first saw you cry
I held you close but your tears did not dry

Halloween passed and you were still sad
I knew you had been fighting with your mom and step-dad

November passed in a rush of concern
Silence and solace you soon started to yearn

It was Christmas Day when I got the news
I saw you in hospital, cut, broken and bruised

You had felt that your life was a mess
Full of pain, neglect, depression and stress

A bridge you were on and a knife you had found
It was a jogger who saw you, lying motionless on the ground

Two months you spent not getting better 
The news of you death came to me in a letter

You were my love, my hope and my joy
Now you are gone, and you were just a young boy

I miss you so much my life is destroyed
All that is left is an empty void

I hold the gun up to my head
I think ‘why not?’ and use the knife instead

Now you are gone, as am I
We leave those behind wondering why

Two young lives were lost that night
And the moonlight glints off our gravestones shining pearly white…

- May 06, 2005




[Tear]
My Fallen Angel

You sit by a window watching the rain
You think you must be going insane
You see a flash
A bolt of light
And then you hear the sound
Of something hitting the ground

You run to the door to see what it is
But what you see
You can't believe
A winged figure
Laying still on the ground

This fallen angel
Has come to you
Now and forever
To help you through

Because this angel fell in love
With a demon from far below
A demon who has now bestowed
Upon this angel to live here on earth
To have his child
To give it birth
To give it life
His own flesh and blood
His own living child
And the angel he loves

But now this angel is deadly depressed
And madly obsessed
With finding a way
To get back home
So she won't be
Quite so alone...

- (c) Copyright Allen Karl Wong, Jr. Young poets Society 2003 all rights reserved.




[apocalypse7]
The Rosebush

The rosebush hides the sun,
as my soul has done for me,
I wish to tell her,
how I really feel and wish for her,
to be with me,
so I hold back my inner feelings,
locked so far away in my soul,
as my mind conjures,
thoughts of my wish,
which shall never come true,
unless I hurt or enlighten myself.

Fear,
the no,
no one wants it,
I feel the rose bush prick
the sun bleeding fore evermore,
holes to many already,
ten bleeding without ceasing,
so it will heal,
or another thorn goes in,
the most beautiful rose yet,
as the sun sets,
it feels the fear and darkness overcome it,
no knowing,
whether to share it's light,
once again,
with that beautiful rose,
and feel the perfect harmony again.




[Dragonix]
Chocolate Dreams

Such lovely scenery
Such deep mystery
Such a fucking fantasy

Frightening tears
That dwells inside
Deepened worries
Left to die

Softly spoken whispers
Chocolate covered hearts
Little girl that’s dreaming
Soul that’s torn apart

Smile now girl
And rip them open
Take their lives
With no regret

Bring them home
And take their heart
To your sweetened chocolate dreams
Where you fully tear apart.

- © Dragonix




[Gwendylyyn]
Trapped Within My Mind

I walk along these lonely streets,
Trapped here in my mind.
I've created my own prison,
Here within my mundane bind.

My soul cannot be freed,
And even as I sit here crying,
I know the world around me,
The world out there, is dying.

My mind wanders,
And my heart bleeds.
My existence renders,
All others to scream.

I curl up in my bed,
wrapped tight within the sheets.
My sister walks into the room,
And her scream echoes through me,
From my head down to my feet.

She's seen the bright red color,
Of the sheets wrapped tight around me.
She runs into the living room,
My death has taken its fee.

I can hear my mother screaming,
my sister out there crying,
knowing there's nothing they can do,
as I lay in my bed dying.

I think about the past,
here in my last moments;
It all flies by so fast,
And now I lay here with my torments.

My world slips away,
and I no longer hear them.
My thoughts begin to sway,
as I lay stuck here in my prison.

Even in death, they won't let me be.
I wish these thoughts were never mine;
And now I'm trapped here in my bind;
Trapped within my mind.

- (c) [Gwendylyyn] 11.10.04




[Stefano]
Less than nothing

Under the guise of friendship
he asked to meet.
With the pretense of empathy
did he lure me.
Feeling the need of understanding
I met him,
learned to trust him,
even to open my heart to him.
Then with the cold blade of carelessness
did he wound me.

And now I fear myself closing off,
becoming more calloused,
more fearful.

How I miss the innocence of my youth,
and the freedom with which I once faced the world.

Now there is only rain,
and bitter winds,
emptiness,
and the sense of being less
than nothing.




[Pyromaniac]
Valentine's Day

Valentines Day,
Is filled with love,
With all the hearts,
And the doves,

Valentines Day,
Nothings the same,
There are no tears,
And no pain,

Valentines Day,
I feel fresh and new,
'Cause on this day,
All I want is you




[Razberri]
Risen

A light beams down on her
The shadows slowly turn
Her heart racing once again
As her feelings begin to burn

Intoxicatingly beautiful
She races to find the end
But all she sees is that man
Who woke her once again

He loved her heart and body
Kept her warm and still
As she rocked back and forth
Holding images she longed to feel

Gave up the hurt and pain inside
To look for words to say
How she felt towards this man
Her every waking day.




[JoeysMonkey]
Me

As my flesh is ripped from the bone,
I wonder how I ended up being so alone...

They rip my tongue out so I can scream,
it slightly feels as if I'm in a hellish dream...

They throw my body in a pit,
and laugh as the match is lit...

The smell of burning flesh fills the night,
so wrong yet so right...

As I lie in my ash filled grave,
the road to hell I have paved...

For my killers were not foe but friend,
I wanted to die young never to reach the end...

For the pain was to great ,
there was no going back,
it was simply to late...

So as they push the dirt over me,
I hope everyone will forget all that I was,
and all that I was supposed to be...

Soon to forget the worst thing of all,
soon to forget,

Me...

- Written November 2004




[Star]
Untitled

I'm like a window
The glass is my heart
the wood is my
friends and family
holding me up
If I fall all is gone
but I will not
because my friends and family
will be there for me.




[Elisa]
My missing piece

The sun slowly rising, that is my heart burning.
The clear running water, that is my unselfishness.
The pure air, that is my need to live.

Like music you charm the sun to turn night into day.
With love you fill me with desire to endless give.
And your soul, is the missing piece that makes me whole.

You my love, are my sun.
You my love, are the clear water running through my veins to purify my soul.
You, are the air I breath to stand strong.

By looking into your eyes, you wash away my pain.
Your voice makes me calm.
And when you take me into your arms, safety fills my soul.

Surroundings disappear as you fill me with your love.
Loneliness is no more.
So to you my angel I give; my heart, my mind, my body and my soul.

- © Malin Persson 04-01-30

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2007-06-06 [Faith.Hope.Love]: The poems seem to be posted in many different ways. :P

2007-06-07 [Bookwyrm]: How so? Some don't post dates, but that seems to be the only real difference...Though I do see a few people put line breaks here and there where others don't...which I can fix real quick. :)

2007-06-07 [GlitchGames]: so whatcha think of my poem?

2007-06-12 [Faith.Hope.Love]: I like your poem, [GlitchGames]. I like poems that have a message that makes us think. :)  [Bookwyrm], maybe I'm so accustomed to the strict format adherence required on ET with their Daily Poem. :P

2007-06-12 [Bookwyrm]: XD I don't have any jobs on ET, much less a poem-related job...they don't seem to like me much there. XD Won't even accept my graphics there, even though I went through all the trouble of uploading them all to ET...Anyway, if I've ever seen their format, it's only been once or twice and I don't remember it. XD We're not as strict here...

2007-06-13 [Faith.Hope.Love]: Hmmm...I'm sorry about that. Elftown is like my home online. I can't complain for I've had very little, if any difficulty with anyone there or here for that matter. I've noticed that things aren't as strict here, but it's not a bad thing. lol I looked at your graphics on ET & left a comment. I have to agree with [Zab]. I noticed that you remarked about your unhappiness regarding the gif format. I left a comment on your graphics page about png's that you might want to try if you aren't aware of them already. Anything I learn, I like to share with others gladly. I don't get over here to Elfpack as often as I'd like to. I do a lot of things on Elf12, so I'm there almost all the time.  :D Congratulations on your recent wedding! :D

2007-06-13 [Bookwyrm]: Elftown is where I started, and then I migrated to Elfpack...now I try and make time for both of them, though there's no denying my jobs are more demanding here than there. XD Thanks for the advice and the congratulations. ^_^ I know about PNGs, but I've been having trouble with that format and transparency.

2007-06-13 [Faith.Hope.Love]: *nods* My offer stands as I stated on ET. I understand, b/c I do mega, mega amount of tasks on Elf12, but I enjoy helping out & doing things for the kids. :D

2007-06-13 [Bookwyrm]: I never even joined Elf12...I considered it, because I wanted to help out there as well, but I thought with my tasks here and then certain wikis of mine that demand a lot of attention...I didn't want to spread myself too thin. I do appreciate your offer. ^_^ And thank you for it. ^_^

2007-06-18 [Faith.Hope.Love]: ...And you're welcome! :D I understand "spreading oneself too thinly". It always seems that I have way too many irons in the fire all at the same time. However, I'd much rather be busy than bored! :D

2007-06-18 [Bookwyrm]: XD Good point! I just don't want to work myself to the bone. I ended up taking a "break" from Elfpack for a while, and now I feel a bit guilty because a lot of work didn't get done. XD I'm back though...yay!

2007-06-27 [Faith.Hope.Love]: Same here with Elf12. If I miss a couple of days & go back, I never see much getting done that needs doing, but we are entitled to a life, too. :P

2007-06-27 [Bookwyrm]: -giggles- True, we are. And sometimes there are outside circumstances that are more important than the internet. -dodges a pack of angry elves- Eep!

2007-06-30 [Bookwyrm]: [Mommie 2 Be♥]: Thank you for your submission. ^_^ Next time, though, please add your name to your submission so that we know who submitted it. Also, please either use the italics tags to set off the title of your poem, or place a ">" at the beginning of your title so it will be italicized.

2007-07-01 [Mommie 2 Be♥]: Oh alright, sorry. =D

2007-07-01 [Bookwyrm]: Perfectly all right. ^_^ I'm about to try and revise the rules page so that I can keep things more organized and hopefully get everything fixed the way it should be. I have to get the go-ahead of some "higher-ups" though. :P

2007-07-01 [Mommie 2 Be♥]: Yeah that's understandable. Is it alright that I put one of the poems I have already submitted to the regular elfpack poetry on here?

2007-07-02 [Bookwyrm]: Yes, but you can't add another poem for a month. It just gives others a chance to add their stuff, I'm sure you understand. ^_^ Also, it only counts as one poem to your count, of course. :)

2007-07-02 [Mommie 2 Be♥]: Lol yeah I figured that. =D

2007-07-16 [Bookwyrm]: Please don't delete the bottom of the page when adding your poem. It deletes the links to other pages. ^_^ Thank you!

2007-07-30 [dragonus]: I added my last poem so far was made qwite reacently yea it's a wierd one I wrote it while listening to music and looking at my tv while it was off. The word's just started to flow so I had to write it down. Hope you all like it.

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